>>59273
Well that's already much better.
My advice: keep some consistent margin around the text (especially between the image and text), and try to keep lines between 40 and 80 characters long to keep is comfortable to read.
Also, put the title either at the top of the text or aligned to the image. It looks pathetic hanging out by itself in a random location by the top.
Finally, use a lighter / more muted color for the background. White is fine, a light muted color will give it a more polished look.