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▶ No.40969
>>40941 (OP)
But we already have a Story thread and a Story Request Thread.
▶ No.40977>>41043
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currently, toying with the idea requested over in the adult kid thread >>39645 but, it's not quite my area of interest, as I prefer AR stories that work up to babyhood. If anyone has some ideas for it that they don't feel like writing themselves (vid related, but I digress), my ears are open.
Additionally, I have a novel length work i've given up on, but it has a lot I can salvage. One chapter was heavily inspired by Long Rifle's Candy Raver (may he rest offline), but written as a bedtime story in Dr Seuss rhyme and rhythm. It was meant as a one-off chapter, and has no substance outside of fetish fuel, but I still think it's worth posting after some editing.
▶ No.40978>>41007 >>41078
I've always kind of wanted an age regression story where the regression stops at their teenage years but still involves heavy diaper usage. I'm not sure what the details would be or why the regression would stop at the teenage years.
Maybe like your standard magic person pissed at the protagonist and starts the regression but the protagonist stops it at around their teenage years but the spell also induced some heavy incontinence and now the main character has to deal with it.
Thoughts?
▶ No.41007>>41039 >>41043
>>40978
I would gladly read something like that. I don't like that AR brings people to ages where I feel creepy reading about them. But teenagers have a lot of embarrassing situations they can be in and I feel less creepy fapping to it.
I also really like stories involving magic. Magic is such a cliche in ABDL stories, but it's also so perfect for the genre.
▶ No.41039>>41043
>>41007
Should the protagonist be male or female? I would probably have it written so it's some 30 year old woman who turns into a diaper dependent teenager via wizard/witch magic or whatever.
▶ No.41043>>41101 >>41416
>>41039
Not >>41007, but frankly, your idea is rife with potential. I've never read a story about an adult regressed to adolescence, even though it's probably the most awkward age you could regress to, especially with diaper-dependence added. I recommend female if that's how you'd write it. You could always include side-characters in a similar sitution if you wanted to do both. If you try to write something you're not interested in you won't know what buttons to push for those who actually are. In other words, write the story you want to read.
that being said, I think I'll take my own advice regarding >>40977. I can think of a few implications of being immediately regressed to babyhood that are worth exploring
▶ No.41060>>41080
I've been writing a serial story on dA about a nursery machine. Definitely my favorite story concept. I think I'm a little juiced on it though. I've put in like 13 chapters and I'm maybe feeling a little cramped by my single world.
▶ No.41078>>41101
>>40978
I actually think this is a good idea.
Male or female, someone in those awkward teenage years would definitely be embarrassing. For a female, I imagine a career woman, on top of the world. Next thing she knows she is a teenager, having to deal with the awkwardness of puberty, and bedwetting.
Kinda hot tbh
▶ No.41080
>>41060
Do you have a link?
▶ No.41101>>41171 >>41620
>>41043
>>41078
I do have one issues regarding the story that can't figure out. Where does she go after her regression? I had two ideas. The first involves her going back to her own house/apartment pretending to be a cousin in to avoid suspicion from the neighbors The other option is she goes back to her parents for help and stays with them until she can fix it. Which sounds better?
There's also the issue of what she does all day since she can't go back to work. I was thinking of her having to do a job a teenager would be doing like working at the movies or a fast food place or something. Any ideas?
▶ No.41102>>41182
Does anyone here do commissions for stories?
▶ No.41171>>41247
>>41101
It could also be that she's transported back in time to her teenage self during her teenage years, just cursed with heavy incontinence. Which presents itself with interesting challenges, as she tries to keep her timeline relatively stable while often being in loaded pampers (and maybe experiencing situations where for periods of time it became normal for her room to be a nursery, etc).
▶ No.41182>>41248
>>41102
Yes - I would - depending on the type of request. Would have to be a subject I was motivated to write myself, though, for it to be any good.
▶ No.41247>>41249
>>41171
It would be interesting if she thought about changing the timeline more to her needs. Maybe change something she regrets or whatever. The nursery bit sounds a like a bit too much though.
▶ No.41248
>>41182
What type of abdl stories are you interested in writing? Can I also have a link to some of your previous work?
▶ No.41249
>>41247
Well, you could just say that whatever magic power that put her into that state will sometimes come along and screw with her. Not like permanently, just make it so one of the days it's normal for her to have a nursery, be dressed like a toddler, etc.
Especially if she does something the magical force disagrees with.
▶ No.41278>>41294
Fuck it. Taking random short story requests, 500-1000 words, maybe more if I really like the idea.
Open to pretty much anything, so long as I'm at least familiar with it. I'll try to do them within a couple days, ideas that get me most aroused get first preference.
▶ No.41294>>41409
>>41278
I've got a bunch of things I'd like to suggest but most of them it would probably be unfair to ask you to attempt in less than a 1000 words, but a concept I love is girls having a diaper messing contest, but portrayed as a major sporting event.
Like two attractive athletic girls enter a stadium, wearing sports bras, hand wraps, and incredibly thick diapers. The event is televised, has a huge crowd, advertisements, product endorsements from the girls, commentators talking about the girls backstory and warm-up before the contest, etc.
I've only ever seen this done in artwork a couple times before and only once in story format before.
▶ No.41304>>43467
I'll take some requests for age regression stories. They'll probably end up five or ten thousand words. My two stories are at ello.co/pillowbottom, with another pending.
▶ No.41409>>41415 >>41430
>>41294
Here you go: https://justpaste.it/8chrequest
Ended up nearly 2000 words. Not what I'm really into but pretty fun. Let me know how I did. Didn't really edit it at all, so there's probably some mistake in there. Definitely a bit rough.
Let me know how I did.
▶ No.41415>>41430
>>41409
Awesome! I'll read it tonight.
▶ No.41416
>>41043
I would literally pay money for this where the character getting regressed is a cute punk male (who is straight, if it comes up)
▶ No.41430
>>41415
>>41409
I just finished reading it. I wish it was longer, but that's just because you made it a really fun read. Thanks for taking that one on.
I didn't notice any big grammatical or spelling mistakes, so you not editing wasn't a big deal.
▶ No.41620>>41628
>>41101
I had an idea that she ends up meeting the kids of her own friends she had back in high school.
Does anyone else have any good ideas for this story?
▶ No.41628>>41634
>>41620
it would be cool to see her old school mate's reaction to seeing her. It wouldn't be so odd seeing a little kid that looks like someone you went to school with, because childhood memories are faded and kids features aren't fully pronounced, but people you knew in high school would have way more memorable faces. Does your character want them to know? Does she avoid looking directly at them to avoid recognition?
I have no ideas what would be good in this story. Adolescence is such a rare final age for an AR story, but as I said before, I'm eager to see how your character reacts to her situation.
by the by, have you got a web page/account where one can read your work?
▶ No.41629>>44275
Just read this one. It's really good, although sadly incomplete:
https://www.dailydiapers.com/board/index.php?/topic/4378-the-new-girl-in-school/
Lots of dom/sub stuff, public humiliation, and some nice medical play.
The formatting of the first few posts is fucked up, but it's still readable if you hunt around to read the right bits in the right order.
▶ No.41634
>>41628
I'll most likely post it on my DA account, "TheQwertyParable" although I'll post to other sites if people are interested enough. All that's up on my account right now is a bunch of Mary Sue OC bios though.
▶ No.41716>>41770 >>42455
Are there any stories with 50's housewifes?
I know this is a specific thing, but there's some untapped potential there.
▶ No.41770>>42358 >>42392 >>42455
>>41716
I don't know of anything specifically but I remember reading a story on DeviantArt once about a guy who uses these hypnosis brainwashing tapes to get a girl to be his permanent baby slave. He does it a couple times to other girls, but then finds it's way too much work taking care of diaper dependent adult women so he uses the tape again to brainwash a woman into being their "mommy" and creates a weird sort of surrogate family of brainwashed women. The story wasn't that well written and wasn't that descriptive but I love the concept and the whole time I was imagining a 1950's Leave it to Beaver kinda look to the whole thing.
I love the 1950's aesthetic in general though, and I think the traditional domestic housewife thing works great with ABDL in both ways. You can either have the loving, attentive mommy figure who takes care of adult babies as part of her domestic duties or you can have the housewife wearing diapers herself as a submissive thing.
I've been thinking of writing a story that includes some elements of this but I don't know how well I could convey it, since it kinda needs a visual element to really get it across.
▶ No.41998>>42002 >>42393 >>43654
Out of curiosity, what sites are good to submit stories on? I'm working on a story at the moment, had originally planned to submit it on DD but the admin there is going through some personal stuff which is causing some delays on that front.
I'm not a fan of posting stuff like that on forums, thus submitting to DD instead of posting on their forum, but I'm not sure what other sites would be good for that outside of making a tumblr or something.
▶ No.42002>>42027
▶ No.42027
>>42002
Ah, thanks! That looks pretty much perfect for what I was looking for.
▶ No.42356>>42396
Trying to find a Persona 5 story? It involves Makoto finding out her sister has a diaper fetish and trying a diaper out for herself. It ends with Makoto getting caught by her sister and said sister messing her diaper in front of Makoto. It was on pastebin but I can't find it. Little help?
▶ No.42358>>42455
>>41770
>You can either have the loving, attentive mommy figure who takes care of adult babies as part of her domestic duties.
This!
▶ No.42392>>42455
>>41770
Actually now that I think about it, I just went through all the ABDL fap fiction writers I follow on DeviantArt and I can't find this story.
If anyone remembers what I'm talking about here please provide a link to it if you can.
▶ No.42393
>>41998
reddit.com/r/abdlstories
▶ No.42396
▶ No.42455>>42456 >>42459
>>41716
>>41770
>>42358
>>42392
Fuck it. I decided to try to write a quick snippet with a 1950s housewife theme. Still think this sort of thing needs a visual element though, since I either lay it on too thick or don't/can't do anything to indicate the 1950's aesthetic.
Tilly hummed as she went around the kitchen. Practically floating along effortlessly on her high heels, with her swing skirt swishing around her as she daintily moved from task to task.
"A woman's work is never done. And my work is certainly never done around here." She thought to herself.
"Still need to get that casserole in the oven. still need to vacuum the den. And still need to make a grocery list for tomorrow morning."
Tilly continued to flit back and forth between her various tasks in the kitchen. Never focusing on one thing too long, she would go back and forth between cleaning various objects around the room and attending to minor cooking tasks.
She was dressed in a gorgeous royal blue swing skirt with matching heels to accompany it. While she was in the kitchen though, she wore a pure white apron, with lace trimming.
Being in the kitchen was no excuse for being a slob however, so she had applied makeup and dark red lipstick just a couple hours before hand.
As Tilly finally reached down to put the casserole into the oven the bulge of the diaper around her waist became far more prominent, accentuating her already quite voluptuous hips and butt.
Of course, Tilly was completely oblvious to that fact. She had been in diapers all her life (as was the style at the time) and thought nothing odd about her garments.
After putting the casserole away to cook Cassie stood up and again practically floated her way back to a cabinet to put away her oven mitts, revealing polished nails and a classy pearl bracelet.
Then from the other room she heard crying. "Oh no!" She though to herself. "I need to check on the baby."
It was hard work taking care of an adult baby, but Tilly wouldn't have traded it for the world. Being able to provide love and affection to someone all the time, was all she could have hoped for.
▶ No.42456>>42459
>>42455
"Coming baby dearest!" She said in a sing-song voice as she walked over to the nursery.
Tilly was almost certain she knew what the problem was as soon as she stepped into the nursery. The air was rank with the smell of a heavily soiled diaper. Tilly worked very hard to keep the nursery smelling nice. Frequently emptying out the diaper pail and filling the room with scents of lilac and lavender as well as talcum powder to help keep both her and her adult baby fresh.
She came up to the now softly sniveling young man cooing and softly shushing. "Oh don't worry baby. Did baby make a stinkie in his Huggies? That's ok, Mommy does that all the time too." She looked back at the seat of his diaper as she held him in her arms, while he nestled into the folds of her dress and apron, still softly making noises. From just a glance at the back of his diaper, it was obvious he had had quite an accident. It didn't bother or disgust Tilly in the slightest though. It was, after all, just what babies did on a daily basis (sometimes several times in one day) and she still wasn't out of diapers yet herself, so no harm done.
She laid him down on the large wooden changing table. The room was filled with massive thick diapers, capable of handling adult baby sized accidents, and every last one of them cute as a button, covered in balloons and bunnies and cute cartoons.
She laid him down on the changing table and untaped the swollen sagging diaper. "Oh my!" She said. "Momma's little baby made quite the messy Pamper for mommy. Mommy can't wait to get you out of this stinky didee and make you all clean and fresh."
Upon untaping the diaper the smell was quite powerful. Obviously making the baby uncomfortable. "Oh don't worry baby" she cooed, starting to wipe him down. "Momma will take care of all this and make you smell all nice and fresh again."
As she worked wiping down his bottom and crotch she worked much like she did in the kitchen, going back and forth between tasks, wiping and soothing, popping a pacifier in his mouth and humming a lullaby tune.
After some time, he was clean and dry, and Tilly pulled out an incredibly thick diaper, solid white with no cartoons or graphics on it, as well as a very large bottle of talcum powder. "Alright then," she said with enthusiasm, "Let's get you into a clean diaper." The baby kicked his legs with enthusiasm.
After sliding the diaper under his bottom and gently powdering him. Mommy Tilly noticed hims starting to feel uncomfortable again, fidgeting and fussing before she taped up the new diaper. And once again, she knew immediately what it was.
"Looks my little baby is getting a little frustrated isn't he?" She asked placatingly. With a smile, she rubbed a bit of baby lotion on her hands and took his penis in them lovingly stroking and carressing his penis as she continued to lovingly coo while she spoke to him. "That's a good baby" she said. "Make a cummy for Mommy." "Mommy knows what you need."
The baby in question seemed to get more and more excited, sucking harder and harder on his pacifier, until without any warning or preamble he tensed up and spurted stream after stream of pearly white ejaculate onto Mommy Tilly's stark white kitchen apron.
Looking down at her handiwork with a proud smile, she said. "Good baby, you did just what Mommy needed you too."
She then proceeded to tape up the diaper on the baby, and then led him off to take a nap in his crib, before she gracefully went back to the kitchen to check on her casserole, and possibly check on her own diaper situation.
After all a woman's work was never quite done here.
▶ No.42459
>>42455
>>42456
my cock is diamonds
▶ No.42482
>>40941 (OP)
I know the image isn't supposed to be related but I'd kill for a Caulifa/Kale hypermess story.
▶ No.43467>>43468 >>43533
>>41304
Do one about a vandal girl regressing to infancy.
▶ No.43468>>43533 >>43927
>>43467
Can do. Could you elaborate on vandal girl? Yeah, vandalism's involved, do you just want that as the inciting crime, or do you have any behaviour in particular you'd like for her? As for regression, do you want a quick drop into infancy or take it in steps? Anything embarrassing or otherwise, you want to happen to her on the way down?
▶ No.43477>>43478 >>43487
Might as well drop this here.
"Accident" at the Grocery Store - https://pastebin.com/jJ1Ey6kf
Summary: MILF goes grocery shopping and wets her diaper, then gets off to it at home.
▶ No.43478
>>43477
Written by me btw. Feel free to leave criticism.
Sage
▶ No.43484>>43487 >>43494
Holy hell, so many diapered MILF stories.
…anyone down to write about a bunch of them having a (very intimate and possibly messy) garden party?
▶ No.43487>>43491 >>43493
>>43477
I like your writing, it's very detailed and expressive, so you get a mileage out of a pretty simple idea. But I think the concept is a little boring. A woman arbitrarily starts to like diapers and then gets off on wetting herself. Your style is top notch though, so it took the idea a lot farther than it would normally. I'd like to see you write some more imaginative, off the wall stuff.
>>43484
I wrote the 1950's housewife thing above. Can you tell me what happens at garden parties? I grew up poor.
▶ No.43491
>>43487
Oh, I don’t have a clue either. I just assumed there would be a discussion of books and light drinks (which slowly escalates into raunchy behavior and swelling diapers, in our world).
▶ No.43493>>43516 >>43651
>>43487
I appreciate the compliments. The concept was derived from somebody at halfchan who wanted a MILF story. I figured it would be a good exercise to get me back into writing. Somebody there also suggested the idea of an incontinence curse, but that seems a bit overplayed as well. I'll have to do some thinking to really get a unique and interesting story.
I took a look at your '50s housewife story above. It's pretty good, but the dialogue along with some of the wording could use some work.
>"Oh don't worry baby. Did baby make a stinkie in his Huggies?"
The use of the word "baby" twice so closely together makes the wording kind of clunky. The first sentence seems pretty unnecessary anyway. You lose nothing from just removing it. You do something similar later on, though it's not in the character dialogue.
>With a smile, she rubbed a bit of baby lotion on her hands and took his *penis* in them *lovingly* stroking and carressing his *penis* as she continued to *lovingly* coo while she spoke to him."
You used both the words "penis" and "loving" in close proximity. Try to expand the vocabulary of the story so you're not using the same words over and over. Not only that, but this sentence is also a run-on. It's a bit of a chore to read. I would reword it like this:
>With a smile, she rubbed some baby lotion on her hands and grasped his penis. She lovingly stroked and caressed his member as she cooed to him.
The use of synonyms will do wonders for your writing. Also, descriptions. Adjectives. Describe in vivid detail what's going on. Let's take the above section again along with the following section and give it some more umph:
>With a smile, she rubbed some baby lotion on her hands and reached for his small member. The "baby" gasped suddenly as she made contact with his skin, the gooey texture on her hand softly massaging his pulsing penis. Up and down her hand moved rhythmically, rotating back and forth, applying pressure on each downward stroke. She looked down at him and cooed softly. "That's a good baby. Mommy will take care of you."
>She watched as her large baby's breathing intensified, his hips pushing forward against each stroke of her slimy hand. He bit down harder on his pacifier and sucked it at an increasing pace as he approached climax. At last, with one final movement of his hips, his whole body tensed up, and pearly white streams of ejaculate spurted out onto Mommy Tilly's stark white kitchen apron. He breathed a heavy sigh of content, and all at once his muscles relaxed as he seemed to melt into the changing table.
I didn't mean to overhaul your writing but hopefully I made my point. Description can take an average scene and turn it into a fantastic one. As you mentioned, I managed to squeeze as much as I could out of a pretty boring premise by doing this. Just my two cents.
▶ No.43494
>>43484
A MILF garden party… I'll think about it and see what I can come up with.
▶ No.43516>>43527 >>43651
>>43493
It's not so much the two uses of baby and their proximity that strikes me as clunky, rather the switch between second and third persons that seems unnatural. Repetition can be a useful tool for an antagonist and the narrator to emphasize a point. "Guess what, fuckface. You're a baby now. Let that sink in. Just kidding, I'll make it sink."
The switch from second to third is awkwardly sudden. It might sound more natural to stay in third person for a scene or just a line.
Eg:
>"Oh don't worry, baby."
>"Baby doesn't have/need to worry."
Still in the imperative, sorta, but in the third person. maybe switch the order on the two sentences to make them more fluid
>Baby doesn't have/need to worry. Did baby make a stinkie in his Huggies?
<Did baby make a stinky in his Huggies? Baby doesn't have/need to worry about that.
Something to think about.
▶ No.43527>>43533 >>43651
>>43516
>Repetition can be a useful tool for an antagonist and the narrator to emphasize a point.
That's true, but the tone set in the story doesn't indicate that the housewife is trying to make a point. She seems quite content with taking care of him in a non-demeaning manner. Plus I still think the use of the words "lovely" and "penis" in such close proximity is clunky. Synonyms help. Anyway, repetition can certainly be a powerful tool but only when used effectively.
>The switch from second to third is awkwardly sudden.
Now this I agree with. I was trying to put my finger on what didn't sound right about that. The repetition of the word "baby" kinda got me, but that sudden change from second to third is what did it.
▶ No.43533>>43651
>>43527
indeed, imperatives are slippery that way. Sorry, I just meant that one line in particular. I ought've made that clear. your suggestions re: adjectives were on point. You can never have too many words in your repertoire.
>>43468
>>43467
bump for requests/suggestions on vandal girl story
▶ No.43592>>43610
I have a bunch of story ideas I wrote down. They're all simple cliche ideas. I was curious if any one have any they'd like to see, or have any ideas to make them different from other stories.
-I was thinking of some kind of story where a schoolgirl goes to a school where diapers are a required part of the uniform and are required to use as well. It could be a long length story of this girl’s daily life.
-A Maid Cafe story where all the maids are required to wear diapers and such. I feel like it has some potential to be just a slice of life story with fetishy moments and such.
-I'm thinking of a story that just goes over the day in a life of two diaper fetishists in love. Maybe like a guy and girl, or two girls. Not sure.
-A Sleepover with with a bunch of diaper wearing girls that get into diaper related hijinks.
-A normal guy who doesn't wear diapers at all is transported to a world where everyone is incontinent
-An adventure fantasy story where all the party members wear diapers for some reason or another
▶ No.43610>>43627
>>43592
>-A Maid Cafe story where all the maids are required to wear diapers and such. I feel like it has some potential to be just a slice of life story with fetishy moments and such.
This might be close to what you are looking for http://www.angelfire.com/anime2/omutsu/cwnn.html
▶ No.43615>>43692
This has been bothering me even though I’m not even into chastity:
Anti-intercourse garments that are basically Goodnites but with an adhesive lining the inside to prevent removal for hours at a time.
▶ No.43627
>>43610
Thank you. But it wasn't a request. I was sharing my own story ideas for things I might write. Although it's probably a good thing to know someone's done this before. I want to have the stories, I write stray from the norm of standard diapers stories. Or I'd at least try to.
▶ No.43628>>43639 >>43648 >>43656 >>43663 >>43786
Would anyone be interested in a story where a girl stays in a diaper for an unrealistic amount of time without changing? Say a week? There would be dumb magic reasons for her not getting a rash. Think it would be worth writing
?
▶ No.43639>>43640 >>43649 >>43730 >>43786
>>43628
Sure, if you can keep things fresh. There’s a story out there about a pair of magical panties that won’t come off till they’ve been crapped in enough times, and each day had a different twist on each accident.
▶ No.43640>>43805
>>43639
That sounds kinda interesting, got a link?
▶ No.43649>>43650 >>43805
>>43639
I'm also interested in this story, link?
>>43648
Is that your reaction to the pic, the story idea, or both?
▶ No.43651>>43655
>>43516
>>43493
>>43527
>>43533
50's housewife author here. Thanks for the critique guys.
The thing is, I just cranked that out fairly quickly on a whim after having a couple beers. Normally, using synonyms and avoiding repetition are things I focus on a lot more in my writing. But I didn't really do any editing on it besides a quick re-read before I posted it.
If I post anything else on here I'll try to take a stricter approach to the editing.
Also, anyone know any good synonyms to use in place of penis? I don't like using it because it sounds too adult, but words like dick or cock sound too adult too.
I guess calling it a pee-pee could work but I don't really like the sound of that either. Seeing baby-speak words written out kinda bothers me.
Thanks again though.
▶ No.43652
You.
Absolute.
Fucking.
Degenerates.
▶ No.43654>>43695
>>41998
Here's a story for you:
While you and your strange friends are role playing as babies and pooping in your oversized diapers, there are (((forces))) plotting the destruction of the Aryan race.
This should be a higher priority than whatever the hell this is you're doing.
▶ No.43655
>>43651
Member, erection, wang, dong, doodle, ding-a-ling, pickle, no-no.
Personally, I like reading baby-speak words abdl erotica. It drives home the power exchange.
▶ No.43656>>43663
>>43628
I know I read a story about this theme. A babysitter didn't change the baby she was watching over like she should have so when the mom (who was a witch) came home.and saw this, she cursed the babysitter into wearing a diaper that wouldn't come of unless she asked some one to change her. I remember it being pretty long and even sketchman though about illustrating it.
▶ No.43657>>43689
This has been floating around in my head for a bit, but what about a "Saw"-like story, replacing the gore/death with humiliating ABDL/fetish things?
Adult or baby. Make your choice.
▶ No.43663>>43685 >>43786
>>43656
Yup, She Won't Change. Wrote this over 3 years ago. https://abdlstoryforum.info/threads/5254-She-Won-t-Change-(plus-some-info-about-me)?p=54535#post54535
It's pretty much my ultimate fetish. Hence, >>43628, please write this. I would read the (week-long) shit out of it.
▶ No.43685>>43692
>>43663
Yeah, okay but I need a bit more set up. I was originally just gonna have the girl do it just because she wanted to do so, but maybe it would be better to have her magically forced to do so? Maybe the girl is already has a diaper fetish, but is magically forced into this scenario. Any ideas on how this should be set up? How she would be forced into this?
▶ No.43689>>44214
>>43657
Got any specific "games" in mind?
▶ No.43692>>43693
I have got one idea for a fairly unrealistic story which could involve extreme humiliation. Basically a young girl with a diaper fetish discovers a mysterious artefact which gives her almost god-like powers to change the world around her at will. Of course the first thing she uses it for is to create a bunch of baby supplies in her room and dress herself in thick, crinkly pampers.
She uses it to do lots of perverted things, but she never really uses it to its full potential. At first she tries to be discreet, but the temptation is too great and she ends up exposing her antics to her sadistic older brother (or sister). He interrogates her and finds out about the artefact, which he promptly confiscates.
Her brother soon figures out how to use it more effectively and then proceeds to truly humiliate her with it. It can change people's memories and even change the basic rules of society in absurd ways. She ends up being made to go to school dressed as a toddler, practice potty training in front of the other kids, and regularly receive harsh punishments for no particular reason.
>>43615
An idea I had for this sort of thing was basically a "cup" that fits snugly over a girl's pussy and is attached around the edges with some kind of high-tech bio-compatible smart glue. It would have small filtered drainage holes which would let pee out but prevent any bacteria or other nasty things getting in. It could also be fitted with a catheter and/or vibrator for extra fun. Diaper changes would happen as normal, leaving the chastity device in place.
>>43685
Personally I'd have it start off as her idea, but then things either go wrong or she changes her mind once she makes her first mess.
▶ No.43693>>43710
>>43692
>Personally I'd have it start off as her idea, but then things either go wrong or she changes her mind once she makes her first mess.
What should the magic be? Magic diapers? A witch? A fairy? Contrivance?
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>>43654
>not wanting to be forcibly turned into a sissy baby by feminists
what are you fucking gay?
▶ No.43710>>43730 >>43786
>>43693
How about some kind of contract? She gets to fulfill her desire with no real-life consequences, but somehow starts to suffer after the first day or two.
>a succubus appears
> tells her she can fulfill her deepest sexual desire
>makes her sign a contract to wear a diaper that is impossible to remove for x amount of days
>after the time has finished, everything is reset and time is rewound to the starting point of the contract
>people can see and smell the diaper, she gets diaper rash but not to a lethal extent, diaper eventually gets too big and smelly to hide at all
>we can see the real-life consequences of spending that long in a diaper (minus the infection/illness), but we know at the end it will have never happened
Just one idea.
▶ No.43730>>43805
>>43710
I'm not going to have rashes in the story. But I'm still going to have all the other inconveniences. You know after mulling over it, I'm probably going to go with a bitch Fairy. If anyone has any other suggestions, let me know. Otherwise I'm going to start writing.
>>43639
Still curious if anyone has a link to this.
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>>43639 >>43648 >>43663 >>43710
I've written up a first draft for the first day of >>43628 and I'd like to get some critique before continuing. I've only written one other story before this, so I'd really like to know what I can improve, add, or remove entirely. I feel like there may be a bit too much unnecessary fluff in there as well some bullshit that doesn't make any sense, but that's what first drafts are for, right?
https://pastebin.com/hxUfbEL2
▶ No.43788
>>43786
reads pretty well for me, cant wait to see how it turns out
▶ No.43796>>43803
>>43786
I read it last night and I have quite a few corrections for you, but I work literally all day today. In short, it's okay, but your phrasing and lack of buildup leaves a lot to be desired. I'll edit it in MS Word as soon as I get the chance, possibly Monday.
▶ No.43803>>43811
>>43796
Lack of buildup? Care to point out a few examples? Or are you going to wait until your MS Word edit is done?
▶ No.43805
>>43640
>>43649
>>43730
Found it, but I’m just going to warn you now: I never said this fic was /good/.
https://pastebin.com/DxD0yEcJ
▶ No.43811>>43825
>>43803
I guess "buildup" would be the wrong word; it's more like description. It would be nice if you described in more detail what is happening.
So I finished editing the first paragraph and as one of the examples, albeit a small one, I'll refer to what happens right before the first messing:
>She was about to pour some milk into her bowl when a few large farts had suddenly come out of her, “Shit, seems like a big one.”
Like I said, it's okay. But a bit more description would be very nice. After editing I came up with this:
>She started pouring cereal into her bowl and was about to pour some milk when she suddenly felt a sharp pain in her gut. She clenched her stomach and some loud gas escaped from behind her, stinking up the air . “Shit, seems like a big one,” she groaned to herself.
It's not much, but it paints us a better picture of what's going on. As they say: show, don't tell.
▶ No.43825>>43833
>>43811
Yeah that's one of my weak points. I'll keep it in mind. Although I'll wait to see what your edit has to offer until then.
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>>43825
So I got off work a lot earlier than expected and finished this:
https://www.scribd.com/document/361689184/Weeklong-Mistake-Edited
There's a lot of red on that paper. I dissected it a lot more than I initially intended. Take it as a compliment though: I really want your story to be as good as it can be.
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>>43833
Btw, download this in order to view the entirety of the comments and accept the changes I made. Read back through to fix any small errors I may have made while editing.
▶ No.43854>>43856
>>43833
Wow, this is a really thorough edit. I'm impressed. You really touched upon some of my weak points, but I thought I should elaborate a bit on some of my choices.
Regarding my use of the word 'load', I find it hard to find places for other synonyms for the word. Since in some spots it doesn't seem right, but I'm going to fix that.
I should have elaborated on when Allison said "I don't have a choice. What I mean to convey was that since Allison has no choice to wear diapers she could easily provide advice to Emily who she unwillingly has no forced to wear a single diaper for a week.
Also as for not explaining the rules I was going to have Emily ask her on what the rules are on the morning of the second day, that's how I was going to go about it.
But overall, this is a really nice edit. I'm going to take most of these edits, but might keep a few things. I'm going to try to work on my descriptions, build ups and run-ons. Your advice will really come in handy.
I'm going to clean up Day 1 with your edits and some of mine and get to work on Day 2. I'll post both at the same time.
▶ No.43856
>>43854
Sounds good. I didn't expect you to accept all of my corrections, especially ones regarding personal preference. Just glad you're open to criticism. It will make your writing worlds better. Can't wait for day 2!
▶ No.43927>>44091 >>45064
>>43468
>Yeah, vandalism's involved, do you just want that as the inciting crime, or do you have any behaviour in particular you'd like for her?
Stereotypical female punk
>As for regression, do you want a quick drop into infancy or take it in steps?
Steps
>Anything embarrassing or otherwise, you want to happen to her on the way down?
Surprise me
▶ No.44029
I just rebooted my DA page if anyone is interested. Got 3 full-length stories, one abandoned story, and a couple short stories on there.
https://thisonecoolguy.deviantart.com/
▶ No.44091
>>43927
Very well. Never knew many punk girls, so give me some time for research. I'll update here
▶ No.44214>>44274
>>43689
I was gonna poll you guys (and the internet) for ideas…
One thought was a girl being trapped in a harness, drugged with a special medicine that would weaken her muscles and leave her incontinent. She'd have two minutes to wet and mess herself. Once it gets to a certain weight, it would release her, allowing her to grab the antidote across the room. If she fails, she'll remain trapped within, as the dungeon's prisoner…
▶ No.44241>>44280
Anyone knows any cute ABDL stories about a little boy/mommy relationship?
▶ No.44274
>>44214
Love that idea. not to split hairs, but better now than after you publish it, the release should be triggered by something other than weight, because the mess is inside the victim and thereby already in the harness.
▶ No.44275
>>41629
>>41629
I want to like this story but the antagonist is basically a psychopath
▶ No.44280
>>44241
Come to think of it, i can't. "College or Cribs" maybe? But that's total regression. Now that you say something a wholesome story where there's not any cruelty or trickery and both are actually into it is something to be desired.
▶ No.44290>>44313 >>44330
Out of curiosity, what would you guys say is better to do in the case of repeated descriptions in a longer story? Stuff like diaper changes and what not, I've had a few in the story I'm writing and I'm worried they're becoming common enough that describing them in detail would border on padding. It feels weird to just gloss over them, though.
▶ No.44297
Been working on this for a while. This is the third or fourth draft. Let me know what you think before I upload it to DA.
The Diapered Dragonborn: Chapter 1
https://pastebin.com/0E7Jxyzb
▶ No.44313>>44335
>>44290
If it's a longer story it's fine to gloss over or entirely skip a change. If you have another plotline going you can switch over to it while the change is happening, or just a good old-fashioned time-advance. If you spread out the descriptions through the story, you can save the best for last. Better that than to bore your readers. Another strategy is to give the protag some games to play during the change. Something to distract them, and then you slip some partial descriptions they happen to notice, and you can save some ammunition for later.
▶ No.44327
I've been following The Nurserymaster's Apprentice for a few years. Updated slowly, but it's a fun take on diaper machines. The real diaper stuff doesn't happen until Chapter 4ish.
https://devipa.deviantart.com/art/The-Nurserymaster-s-Apprentice-Chapter-1-440911301
▶ No.44330>>44335
>>44290
Personally I've read the standard "changing scene" enough times that I often find those bits boring.
It's fine to describe mundane details of someone's daily activities - good writers do it all the time to add immersion - but you need to intersperse them with something more interesting. For example, describe bits of a diaper change in parallel with a conversation people are having:
>He began sprinkling the baby powder generously over her crotch. "So, do you want to go to the park later?"
>
>"Won't people see my diaper," the little girl blushed.
>
>He pulled the front of the clean diaper up between her legs and began securing the tapes. "Little babies don't worry about things like that. It's not like anyone in this town is going to recognize you."
Something like that is fine. If there's nothing interesting going on at the same time though, and the diaper change isn't unusual in any way, you should only briefly mention it.
▶ No.44335
>>44313
>>44330
Thanks for the tips. I'm gonna try and see if I can incorporate some of those ideas into the changes I know are likely coming up, otherwise I'll end up shortening them down to a sentence or so to avoid making things boring.
▶ No.45064
>>43927
re: the vandal girl story,
I moved Stinky Street over to FTT, and the story you requested is going to intertwine with the events therein, starting at Part 34. It's just one short part where I took the chance to get to know some new characters, nothing too fappy yet, but I'll update here. if you have any requests or critiques, now's your chance.
http://z13.invisionfree.com/foxtalestimes/index.php?showtopic=803
Also, if any other writefags would like to weigh in, please don't hold back. It's my first story and it's probably going to be quite long, so I don't want to keep up any bad habits.
▶ No.45177>>45193
>>43786
>Be writing a story
>Try coming up with a name for the character
>"OH I know, I'll just name her after that old Pink Floyd song!"
>"I'm a genius, surely no one else did this!"
>See your story
>Mfw no face
Anyways, it's looking pretty good so far.
…You wouldn't be too offended if a story happened to come out featuring a girl by the same name as the one in yours, right?
▶ No.45193>>45194
>>45177
I don't mind. I'm almost positive that there's a lot of diaper stories with a character named Emily. So go ahead and do whatever the hell you want.
Also what's the story your writing? What sort of fetishy ideas do you have for it?
▶ No.45194>>45196 >>45198 >>45212
>>45193
It's pretty plain. It's about this bladder-incontinent girl trying out an experimental pill-based cure for her affliction, unaware of the… "unfortunate" side effects (They also make you generate a lot more waste really quickly) (Yeah it doesn't make much sense but whatever) When she realises she's down to her last adult pull-up, she pops way too many of the pills and goes to buy more incontinence aid.
It will involve some pretty heavy panty messing, as well as the obvious impending disaster.
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>>45194
The original was vore
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>>45200
Kill yourself, croc. What's fucked up is some people actually kinda liked the stuff you've written, you even had one i kinda liked. But you act like a tard everywhere you go and delete all your stuff. Just yesterday i read a thread on DD where someone was looking for your content and like 30 people all said you rage quit, and that though they they would read your stuff, they don't want to deal with your personality. There's plenty of other people writing mediocre fap fics. Charging money for the garbage fap material you write is insane. Trying to re-brand yourself is even more insane.
▶ No.45212>>45213
>>45194
What, the the pic or the story?
>>45198
I know, which is why I posted the cropped version. Don't imagine most people here are into vore.
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>>45212
Oops, first reply was meant for >>45196